考研作文简单句

写作满分句型和单词替换

一、简单句

1. 被动句–>推荐写在作文的第一段的最后一句话，引出文章中心时使用或者第三段第一句话文章总结时使用。

   1. 只要在作文中见到人们、大家、许多人、越来越多的人等人称代词作主语时都可以考虑写成被动。
   2. 例子：

      1. Partents should be respected/supported by us.

         1. parents–>supreiors /the elderly / senior citizens
         2. should–>be suppoesd to/ought to/be obliged to(法律责任)
         3. us/we/people–>human beings /private individuals /the folks /masses(mass +es)
         4. 在这个句子中us最好换为更准确的词：offspring kids/ descendants(后代)
         5. youngsters and teenagers(年轻人)/youngerster on campus/undergraduates
         6. 许多人都应该关注环境污染：experts and professors
         7. 各行各业的男男女女：men and women in all works
         8. 我们应该更有自信:all children and adults
         9. 我们应该支持国货：customers

      2. 我们不应该盲目追星：

         1. Celebrities suppose not to be pursued blindly by teenagers and youngsters.
         2. not -->Never /hardly /by no means /under no circumstances /fail to

      3. 污染很严重：

         1. pollution is thought very serious by an increasing number of experts and professors.
            1. Think–>presume /contend(v.竞争 斗争 奋斗 主张)/maintain /cling to the perspective that 认为
            2. very–>enormously /remarkably /exceedingly /extraordinarily
            3. serious–>fatal /grave(n.墓穴 庄严的 严肃的 严重的) /fearful(可怕的 担心的 严重的) /severe(严厉的 剧烈的 苛刻的)

2. There be句型（倒装）–>第二段第一句话

   1. There are a lot of reasons to explain my point.
      1. many–>a sea of /an ocean of /an army of /a multitude of
      2. reason–>causes /factors /elements
      3. explain–>give rise to(引起 使发生 导致) /account for
      4. idea–>argument /viewpoint /perspective /outlook(n.展望 态度 观点 景色)

3. 比较结构

   1. as…as.(比喻)
      1. 作文中出现形容词副词的地方都可以考虑使用as…as,但是推荐写在文章中心句（第一段的最后一句话，第三段的第一句话）引出文章中心时使用.
      2. 举例：

         1. liu is very beautiful–>liu proves as gorgeous as a white lily,which manages to catch the eyes of an ocean of teenagers and youngsters.

            1. be:现在进行时的be不可以替换
               1. look /smell /taste /feel /sound
               2. seem /appear /prove
               3. become /get
               4. keep /remain
            2. beutiful–>gorgeous /attractive

         2. 自信很重要：

            1. Confident seems as important/imperative as water,which plays a key role in the normal growth of all creatures in the world.

4. the+adverb/adjective, the+adverb/adjective–>推荐写在第二段表原因时使用

   1. The farther one climbs,the higher he will see.
      1. farther表示实际距离的远，further表示内心这种虚构的远
   2. 若主句与从句的动作都没发生过，主句用一般将来时从句用一般现在时表将来
   3. 越努力越幸运：The harder youngsters on campus remain,the more fortunate they will become.
   4. 交流文化的越频繁，经济发展越迅速:The more frequently clutures are exchanged,the more rapidly economy will advance.