1. Election manuscript
Dear leaders, colleagues
Good morning everyone, I am honored to be with so many outstanding leaders and colleagues,
Participate in the election of the Youth League branch.
My name is Li ****, I come from ****, and I am a development engineer, which is a "hair loss bald Mediterranean" programmer. Last year, the school recruited to join the company. For more than half a year, through participating in various activities organized by the party branch, league branch, trade union, and department, as well as learning at work, I have a deeper understanding of the company, and the handling of some things is more in line with the company's philosophy.
Among these activities, the one that impressed me the most was the face-to-face sharing meeting between the **** League committee and new employees during the school recruitment training.
At that time, the sharing session was divided into **** first experience, warm ****, and ****. I grew up with the Youth League Committee and showed off my five wonderful links. We worked with the predecessors of the Youth League Committee in a relaxed and lively atmosphere. Communicate, speak freely, share your heartfelt thoughts.
I just left the campus, a little confused, a little lonely, I feel the warmth of the class, the warmth of the collective, and the warmth of the family.
So why not join this warm family and contribute your own strength?
During the university, I participated in a lot of club activities. I served as the Minister of Outreach Department of the Speech and Eloquence Association for one year and the chairman of the Supervisory Board of the Association for half a year. The Communist Party of China.
So I think that I have the most basic ability to complete the work given to me by the League branch, and by learning from my predecessors and colleagues, and working together with everyone, I will definitely be able to complete the task well.
Finally, I also wish all the best for this election, all the leaders and colleagues all the best in their work, and the better and better development of the company. thank you all!
2. Background description
1. Participate in the elections of the secretaries and committee members of the various branches of the company’s Youth League Committee-the process is super-standard, but I did not expect it to be very important (the manuscript was written an hour before the meeting, and it took about half an hour to write);
2. I thought that the leader attending might be the director of the party * department, but I didn't expect that the general manager and a deputy general manager of the company also attended and gave a long speech. (I am a little nervous as a rookie in the workplace, but I prepared the manuscript in advance, and I also practiced it several times before the meeting);
3. Because there is not a lot of time and there are a lot of people running for the election, the time for each person to speak is 2 - 3 minutes. (But everyone on the scene spoke within 2 minutes, mine is similar, some of them are tens of seconds)
4. The result of the election: This monkey was fortunately elected as the secretary of the branch (heavy responsibility)
3. Speech draft analysis and actual scene reproduction & analysis
(Stand up, before speaking, stand firm , and make eye contact with most people on the scene . The process is about 2--4s, then, start the speech---this can make the speech less rushed and more stable)
Dear leaders, colleagues
Good morning, everyone. I am honored to be with so many excellent leaders and colleagues . (Appropriately express the praise and appreciation of the on-site personnel to show respect and recognition )
Participate in the election of the Youth League branch.
My name is Li ****, from ****, my position is a development engineer, which is a " hair loss bald Mediterranean " programmer ( appropriate humor, but self-deprecating , this occasion is more serious, humor needs to be cautious. After finishing speaking Someone laughed, hhh, some effect), the school recruited to join the company last year. For more than half a year, through participating in various activities organized by the party branch, league branch, trade union, and department, as well as learning at work, I have a deeper understanding of the company, and the handling of some things is more in line with the company's philosophy.
Among these activities, the one that impressed me the most was the face-to-face sharing meeting between the **** League committee and new employees during the school recruitment training.
At that time, the sharing session was divided into **** first experience, warm ****, and ****. I grew up with the Youth League Committee and showed off my five wonderful links. We worked with the predecessors of the Youth League Committee in a relaxed and lively atmosphere. Communicate, speak freely, share your heartfelt thoughts.
I just left the campus, a little confused, a little lonely , and I felt the warmth of the class, the warmth of the collective, and the warmth of the family .
So why not join this warm family and contribute your own strength? (Indicate the original intention of participating in the election . Optimization: Can you add: and bring warmth to more people? --- Sublimation )
(There should be a sentence to buffer the turning point , otherwise it will be a little abrupt.)
During the university, I participated in a lot of club activities. I served as the Minister of Outreach Department of the Speech and Eloquence Association for one year and the chairman of the Supervisory Board of the Association for half a year. The Communist Party of China.
So I think I have the most basic ability to complete the work given to me by the League branch (by giving practical examples and facts to show that I have the relevant abilities. Be humble, no, I'm just a cook, compared to other big guys, I'm okay Dishes, hhh),
And by learning from your predecessors and colleagues, and working together with everyone, you will surely be able to complete the tasks well . (Again, I will show that I will work together with everyone to complete the work)
Finally , I also wish all the best for this election, all the leaders and colleagues all the best in their work, and the better and better development of the company. (Regular operation: express the blessing at the end , but my blessing can still be diligent)
thank you all!
4. Structural analysis and bonus points
1. Structural analysis
- who am I?
- What should I do?
- Why am I doing this?
- How do i do this?
2. Bonus points
1. Stand firmly and make eye contact with the audience before speaking; (1. If you are nervous, you can look at the audience's forehead; 2. Eye contact can make the audience think that you are communicating with him)
2. Add appropriate humorous ingredients according to the occasion, and can laugh at yourself appropriately;
3. Express your appreciation and recognition of some of the advantages of the participants;
4. This time I am reading the manuscript throughout the whole process, which is a bit degraded. What's even worse is reading the manuscript throughout the reading, but not making eye contact with the audience while reading it. If you are not so eager to read the manuscript and increase eye contact with the audience, the live effect will be better;
5. As far as the election speech is concerned, two assumptions need to be added before the final blessing:
1. If you are elected, what will you do (do not forget the original intention, unity and cooperation or more specific general actions)
2. If you are not elected, you should also express your magnanimity (you can express your own sadness, and at the same time show respect and support for the judgment and choice of leaders and voters from the overall interests. There is no best, only the most suitable, oneself I will continue to learn, support and cooperate with the work, shine a light)
6. If it is not a very serious occasion, you can also appropriately add some verbal interaction with the audience. Method: Ask the audience a question (the answer to the question should preferably be one or two words , so that the interactive effect will be better)
7. Finally, express my blessings to the meeting and the people present.